OK - I asked for it. I wanted a critique of a new rhyming MS and I got it. It wasn't a positive critique -- in fact, it was downright embarrassing. But, I let some time pass and now I can see where I got off track.
The difference between fiction and reality? Fiction has to make sense.
-- Tom Clancy
Carrie Pearson is a children's book author, writer-cheerleader, and mentorship matchmaker.