The Southwest Michigan Land Conservancy, a nonprofit land conservation organization, is celebrating its 25th anniversary this year. Their 2016 Storybook Hike Series is such a fun way to celebrate this milestone. They hosted me and A Warm Winter Tale at their Kalamazoo preserve on February 27, 2016 and I had a blast!
The intent of our storybook hikes is to introduce nature to children in a fun and engaging way, that also supports their language arts development and their love of books.
The book had been laminated and stationed throughout the trail. We stopped to read each page, digest the wonderful illustrations by Christina Wald, and learn about how animals adapt to keep warm in the cold weather. Sunny skies, happy children, nature = a perfect day!
Laura Backes, former children's book editor and now co-founder of Children's Book Insider, wrote a helpful article in their newsletter about the perennial topic of leaving room for illustrations. I've blogged about the "why" of this concept before and now Laura's perfect algorhythm for "how" to keep word count down follows. To read the full newsletter and access all of their publications and resources, consider becoming a member of Children's Book Insider.
"Leave lots of room for illustrations. I mean LOTS of room. This is the best way to cut down your number of words, and the hardest thing for most writers to do (unless you're also an illustrator, in which case you've got an advantage here). First, study books with short texts and see how much of the story is contained within the pictures. Then write your first draft, forgetting about word count. As you revise, think about what each illustration might look like. It helps to create a 32-page "dummy" book and put your text on 26-28 pages (leave the other pages blank for title page, copyright, end pages, etc.). * HERE IS THE EXCITING PART! Then write a description of each illustration, or sketch one out (don't worry, no one will see this but you). Now, what do you say in the text that's also depicted in the pictures? Take it out of the text. It doesn't need to be stated twice. Kids are looking at the illustrations while an adult is reading the words, so they'll get that information."
And let me tell you, IT WORKS! Kaboom! Useless words are out! Try it and let me know how it works for you!
Carrie Pearson is a children's book author, writer-cheerleader, and mentorship matchmaker.