A 2FER: revision and voice

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A writer friend, Shutta Crum, shared a great post today that I will pass along for two reasons:

1. to see if you fall into the trap of “ya, butting” when provided with a critique of your work (note: you should not!), and
 
2. to see a perfect example of “voice.” I don’t know the author Keith Cronin but I sure feel I do after reading his post.

Without further ado, here is your 2FER for today (dare you to say that 10 times fast!): http://writerunboxed.com/2013/07/09/two-words-writers-should-avoid/?utm_sour

Enjoy and let me know what you think.